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I like the overlapping circles of the second one. I wonder why you’re limiting the color palettes so much?
The typography in the circles feels pretty unrefined and not as interesting as it could be. Also, you need to clarify that the times are for the receptions (perhaps with color?
The cover on the first side is underutilized. The back has some fun things starting to happen. What about bringing some depth/perspective?
Overall, the colors seem really, really muted. Almost like this was a two color job.
You could get some really interesting things where the circles overlapped and mixed colors. also, I think the circles on the back would have more energy if the size changed as well as tint.
January 13, 2010 at 1:53 am |
I like the overlapping circles of the second one. I wonder why you’re limiting the color palettes so much?
The typography in the circles feels pretty unrefined and not as interesting as it could be. Also, you need to clarify that the times are for the receptions (perhaps with color?
The cover on the first side is underutilized. The back has some fun things starting to happen. What about bringing some depth/perspective?
Overall, the colors seem really, really muted. Almost like this was a two color job.
You could get some really interesting things where the circles overlapped and mixed colors. also, I think the circles on the back would have more energy if the size changed as well as tint.