Ethiopia Book

This is what I have so far. Needs detail, which I am working on.

2 Responses to “Ethiopia Book”

  1. thomasunterseher Says:

    Just realized I left the Colon on the cover….. That will be taken off!!!

  2. David Maier Says:

    The first cover is strongest, but it’s very, very plain and under developed. What can you do to add some interest? Texture, details, designed type?
    The same goes for the inside. The middle spread has an interesting connecting element, be careful of going too far with it though!!
    The first spread could work, but will need a LOT of polishing and detail work to make it sing.
    Watch your margins on the text boxes… why so tight?
    KEEP GOING

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